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please proofread: Happy to share your complete transfer confirmation. Please note, that the first page is for your arrival (which you already have), and the second one is for your departure.
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Your sentence is mostly clear, but here's a slightly refined version for clarity and style:
"I'm happy to share your complete transfer confirmation. Please note that the first page is for your arrival (which you already have), and the second one is for your departure."
This version eliminates the comma after "note" and uses "I'm happy" for a more conversational tone.
Suggestions
- What specific information is included in the transfer confirmation?
- Do you have any questions about the arrival or departure process?
- Is there anything else you would like to know about the transfer confirmation?
- How do you feel about the refined version of the sentence?
- Would you like any further assistance with the transfer confirmation?
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